domingo, 16 de agosto de 2009

THE LADY IN WHITE

the story is very intersting (why)
becouse you won´t know if the protagonist is living a real life
john, has a wife and has a son, but with the time he thinks that his life isn´t real
then he and his assistant they investigate what happen
they went to the ville to seek a man to hep them to find a answer
and he tells them that a woman in black on the street was a kind of ghosty, a
and he guess that his wife was that ghost
but at the end of the story he undestand thar is family is real.

4 comentarios:

  1. don't forget the periods are very important
    and capitalize the first word

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  2. When you begin a paragraf you have to use a capital letter. But you did a excellent work

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  3. Luz your compotition is very good!
    But you wrote he undestand remember when is third person the verb it's he understands.

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