the story is very intersting (why)
becouse you won´t know if the protagonist is living a real life
john, has a wife and has a son, but with the time he thinks that his life isn´t real
then he and his assistant they investigate what happen
they went to the ville to seek a man to hep them to find a answer
and he tells them that a woman in black on the street was a kind of ghosty, a
and he guess that his wife was that ghost
but at the end of the story he undestand thar is family is real.
domingo, 16 de agosto de 2009
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don't forget the periods are very important
ResponderEliminarand capitalize the first word
When you begin a paragraf you have to use a capital letter. But you did a excellent work
ResponderEliminarLuz your compotition is very good!
ResponderEliminarBut you wrote he undestand remember when is third person the verb it's he understands.
where are the video? mmmmm
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